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c24
Status: c24
July 4, 2025
I was pleasantly surprised when I started reading this. It flows well, and has plenty of character. The protagonist is likeable, even though he's cold, obsessive, and even quite anti-social. The only negative I have worth mentioning is a general bias against regression-type stories, though this doesn't seem to fall prey to the traps of foreknowledge. The protagonist's path diverges very heavily from his previous life, even though he's clearly influenced by the events of the future, and his knowledge hasn't interfered in the building of tension. It's all been very ... more>> believable, and I haven't encountered any major contrivances with the sequence of events thus far. As a vague example, he meets a group that becomes famous in the future, but it was due to the deliberate and believable actions taken by another character, not random chance. I'm particularly interested in how his relationship with the old knight will progress, and I'm hoping that his past-life friend has a larger role to play, since he was quite charismatic. <<less
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