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June 24, 2025
(TRIGGER WARNING) PLEASE READ LATEST SPOILER BEFORE READING ANY OTHER REVIEWS, INCLUDING THE REST OF THIS ONE ... more>> Spoiler the excerpt from chapter 74 below serves as enough confirmation that this is a self-insert wish-fulfillment novel (in case it is not obvious enough, the fetishes on display below are humiliation and pee - there are more fetish inserts described in my full review) the fact that the positive reviewers are completely fine with the chapter content below as they have not come back to edit their reviews to warn people, shows that they are fine with anything that goes as long as they feel good while reading it, so their reviews are inherently biased. where do you draw the line? at what point can a person say, 'enough is enough?' if you are fine with the content below, immediately stop reading this review and go read this novel, as there is nothing else I could do that could persuade you otherwise. with that being said, EDIT YOUR REVIEWS AND EXPLAIN YOURSELVES YOU FAKE CIRCLEJERKING COWARDS CHAPTER 74: "Right. But wait a moment. I need to go to the laundry room for a bit." "The laundry room? Why?" "I was so surprised just now that I had a bit of an accident." Gray said hesitantly, crossing her legs. But her face wore a mischievous smile. Ugh. Disgusting. I really hated unhygienic things. "That's a filthy joke, " I muttered with a frown. "Hm?" Her eyes curved like crescent moons as she chuckled. "Who said it was a joke? I'm serious." She doubled down on the bit. Maybe she found my reaction funny since I'm usually so straight-faced. "Whatever you say." "Wait, you don't believe me? I really wet myself down there." "Enough." I furrowed my brows. Gray burst out laughing. "I'll wait here, " I said curtly. "Mhm. I'll be back. But it'll take a bit. I have to wash them, after all." She winked. This damn brat. "Gray Habanero, " I growled. "Kyahaha~! Sorry, sorry~" "Keep the filthy talk to a minimum." "Okay~ But you know, your reactions are seriously hilarious, Professor. You get all flustered. So cute~" I stared at her in silence. "Okay, okay! Don't glare at me like that. Mmkay? I'm off now~!" And just like that, I got teased endlessly by someone far younger than me. ... "I'm back, Professor~" "Let's continue." "Mhm. But wait a sec~ Hmmm.." Gray rummaged around in her shoulder bag for a moment. "Huh? Where did it go? I brought it with me.." "What are you looking for?" "Well, since you didn't believe me.. I was going to show you.." ".. ??" She looked back up at me and gently pressed her legs together, her face brimming with mischief. "Oi, you little.." I had no idea what kind of face I was making, but it must've been pretty funny since Gray burst out cackling. "Kyahahahahaha!!" I had made a mistake. I never should've let her know how much I hated unhygienic jokes. These damned catfolk - they always loved toying with humans like this. "Are you that embarrassed?" Gray asked, eyes gleaming. I didn't respond. "You're such a virg*n loser, Professor~ So pathetic~" [collapse] initial rating: 5/5 stars this reads like a self insert novel. no clue why author did not make it a vr game instead since everything has been gamified during transmigration, and MC gains power effortlessly, so nothing feels real. misunderstandings only form because mc's power is extremely overpowered to the point where you look s*upid if you didn't fall for it + characters are made intentionally slow-witted and can't put two and two together which results in the misunderstandings only snowballing from there, since if they found out too early the MC would die and the novel would be over. (-1 star for wish fulfillment) characters feel fake too, as most important characters are given quirky gimmicks such as being weak instead of strong, having pet characteristics, being a delinquent, having disabilities like deafness, or is in a high position like royalty. adding to this, the dialogue is idealized - it feels forced and unnatural which in turn makes moments not feel genuine at all. (-1 star for implausible characterization) on top of that, author repeatedly fetishizes female characters due to the listed quirks above such as: overcharacterization of features like legs Spoiler CHAPTER 32: "Don't spread your legs like that when you're sitting." "That came out of nowhere. You actually care about this stuff?" "Yeah." "But these are my legs. I can sit however I want." "No. What if someone sees your underwear?" "I usually wear undershorts to prevent that... Wait, no, why am I even discussing my sitting posture with you? Why are you here?" "I won't tell you until you close your legs." Gray stared blankly at her for a moment. Then, with a sigh, she got off her chair, stood up, and spread her feet apart - front to back - slowly lowering herself into a full split. Her hips touched the floor, legs in a perfect 180-degree angle. "Whoa, you're really flexible!" "Right? I can even split them a bit more if I want - wait, no! Seriously, why are you here? Speak before I smack you." "Uh... I'll tell you if you close your legs..." [collapse] describing feet to build connection Spoiler CHAPTER 10: "I thought she'd only do this for a few months when she first started attending these funerals." "Right? She must've been about fifteen at the time, so people assumed it was just a phase. She's royalty, after all." "But seeing her continue for years, never missing a single week, traveling all across Hiaka... it made me change my mind." However, choosing only funeral ceremonies to attend - I doubted her intentions were purely virtuous. this information, given in chapter 10, that the MC already knows, is repeated in chapter 54, but with fixation on bruised, blistered feet and painted as something 'beautiful' which makes no sense since potions exist in this world (mentioned in chapter 26), making this sequence entirely avoidable as the person in question is a princess which means they could get potions/elixirs easily to treat their wounds. one review mentions 'zero reading comprehension'... when they just completely ignore the above reasoning + make up an entirely new argument... no one said anything about romance. fixating on this one part instead of everything else mentioned is when you know that the story's cooked. you'd think that they're secretly the author with that level of denial. all of the positive reviews are essentially carbon copies of each other, using the same talking points and listing only the same 'pros' and none of the cons. it's like watching chatgpt repeatedly give the wrong answer with different words for each response, while affirming that it's correct in a positive manner. I would say that they're written by ai but that would be disrespectful to the ai. CHAPTER 54: "Better now?" she said, showcasing her pale feet where blisters, bruises, and wounds blossomed. "Don't you have a single word of concern to say after seeing your pitiful student's feet so ruined?" "So, why has the princess with such sore feet come to visit a measly professor without taking a rest first?" "Look at your feet." "My feet?" Rebecca looked down at her red, blotchy, bruised, and blistered feet. "Yes. Those beautiful and admirable feet." I gave her basic first aid by cleaning the wounds, treating the blisters, wiping away pus and blood, applying ointments, and finally wrapping the foot gently in a bandage. But what surprised me was how calloused her feet were. I had assumed that as a royal princess, her feet would be pale and soft. But every spot I touched was rough, hardened by calluses. [collapse] or pet-play disguised as increasing bond Spoiler CHAPTER 14: Her family - the Csikos line - was descended from an ancient clan of canine beastfolk. Elize's pink eyes sparkled with urgency as she recognized the large balloon bone. "Give it to me, " she said, holding both hands out. "Elize. Wait." "Quickly." "I said, wait. I'll give it to you once I'm done." "Please. The bone. Hurry." "Stay." Her body froze. [Black Dragon Division, First-Year, Elize: Stay...??] Eventually, she quietly withdrew her hands and waited obediently, like a well-trained pup. "Well done." [collapse] in particular, author depicts beastfolk as unintelligent because of their "animalistic" traits as per usual fiction, since if beastfolk had even the average level of intelligence the author wouldn't be able to pull this kind of thing off. normal social interactions are close to nonexistent which does not help the author's case and only further highlights the fictitiousness of the entire thing. (-1 star for bad writing) furthermore, author attempts to write mystery for a story that does not require it to be an enjoyable read. (-1 star for forced plot devices) Spoiler unknown deaf girl named eve has way too much screentime plus later chapters start making allusions to the bible with character names like cain (fake identity of MC, name suddenly appeared in his head), and demons are main overarching threat of the novel. but why did the MC immediately have the name cain pop into his head to use as his secret identity? if you don't want to look it up, cain is the first human born from adam and eve, and is also known as the first mu*derer after he kills his brother abel out of jealousy. the name of mc's assistant is adele, which is just a female abel if you flip the d to a b and remove the e at the end of her name - it's like the author isn't even trying. CHAPTER 69: "This Chief Professor Cain person is incredible. How did they make something this massive?" "Indeed." "But their name almost sounds like it's related to mine, doesn't it? 'Cain and Adele, ' haha. Maybe that's why they're so incredible!" "Indeed, " I replied again. CHAPTER 70: Adele... who are you, really? What is the "massive threat" that lurks with you? Should I kill you? God declared to Cain, "Now you are under a curse and driven from the ground, which opened its mouth to receive your brother's blood from your hand. When you work the ground, it will no longer yield its crops for you. You will be a restless wanderer on the earth" (Genesis 4:11-12). In response, Cain lamented, "My punishment is more than I can bear. Today you are driving me from the land, and I will be hidden from your presence; I will be a restless wanderer on the earth, and whoever finds me will kill me" (Genesis 4:13-14). God responded, 'Not so; if anyone kills Cain, he will suffer vengeance seven times over.' Then the Lord put a mark on Cain so that no one who found him would kill him" (Genesis 4:15-16). also mc's name is dante , aka dante 's inferno. last name hiaka po, teacher at hiaka academy. so creative. like what are we even doing here? religious references like these are often just a cheap attempt at adding substance and depth, though here it seems to be the literal core of this novel as the author has no idea how to make an actual compelling story, so they have to cheat by using religion. how trite. again, the story does not need mystery for people to be hooked. not a single soul has pointed out the bible insinuations, giving the impression that no one actually cares about the story and are just hooked because the MC flexes on everyone else, they like that the characters slowly bow down to the MC, and the author writes "hype aura farming and wholesome moments". no clue why people praise and like the MC so much like he's the second coming of jesus christ, as he has done nothing to deserve it other than simply being the protagonist - maybe they are also imagining the character as themselves? "decent read" my ass... [collapse] the so-called mystery above only serves as more evidence that this is a wish fulfillment novel and that the MC is just author's self insert - random guy suffers from many misfortunes only to suddenly become handsome, powerful, important, and definitely thriving compared to his past life. originality does not exist, so if you ignore or downplay the glaring problems (very obvious to tell who's doing both), or just use your imagination using the story as a template instead of following the author's vision, don't let me stop you. final rating: 1/5 stars <<less
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